His Presence
Posted: Thursday, March 19, 2009
by Asmita - The Candles
CANDLES
I have a God, who is so great,
Who stays with me, close & near.
He keeps His arms around me,
And makes me feel safe & secure.
He always keeps His promises,
He is my strong & mighty tower,
I dont have anything to fear.
He forgives all my sins,
He is my one & only cure.
His Presence makes me happy always,
Coz He stays with me, close & near.
(It is an emotional expression of Mrs. Asmita Patra, thats me. Sometimes I think if I would not have a God like the God I have right now what would have happened to me? Where would have I been? In today's world we don't think about God, Spirituality etc. much, infact we need Him more these days. I am really grateful to Him and I am what I am all because of HIM)
Asmita Patra is married and from India. She teaches the kids in a small school. She is the wife of Chiradeep. She publishes a booklet 'CANDLES' along with her husband. She is a singer and always ready to sing for the Almighty.
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More commentsThis is great, Asmita. I really enjoyed this poem. I hope we'll see more of your poetry here. I'll be watching for it.I don't write poem. But it was an experience I penned down and my husband helped to bring it to a poetry form. I need to learn writing poem from you...Thanks for the comment...
Great work Asmita, I have to second what Teresa says, I love your name. and I loved the poem.....so full of meaning, and heartfelt. I hope you will write more, and welcome to SearchWarp. I look forward to reading more of your work.....Your friend in pen, and fan......Gary.Oh Thanks! Its all because of my great God. Thanks again...
Asmita,This is BEAUTIFUL! I feel the same ... and more. Thanks for sharing this with us.Thanks a lot Ronya...God bless you for the comment.
Great job, Asmita. Your poem reads like a Proverb. Great fundamental truths!!yes..this proverb I have to remember till the end and I wish you all for the same...
Good job Asmita, you will soon out do your hubby in writting skills. Keep it up.with love,SwapnaThanks for the encouragements...God bless you...
Asmita,Lovely poem. Thank you for your sharing words -- simple words, powerful message!NancyThanks Nancy for the comment...
Beautifully written and very emotionally moving, Asmita. Just reading it I feel I am there with you in His Presence. Your gratitude shows!!!Thank you Christine for that sweet comment. This is very important in my life and I wrote that. God bless you.
God Bless You Asmita. Wonderful poem. A heartfelt poetic sonnet written straight from the love you hold within for our Savior. Continue to write, stay encouraged, and know that in the Kingdom of God everything already rhymes. :-)DeborahWow....DEborah! I am so encouraged by your comment. Thank you so much. God bless you.
that was realy hot thank you for leting us know God is with us every day of our life thanks to let us knoe that we have a God who never fail.Was it hot? Anyway thanks for the comment.
Amen Asmita!Thank you for oozing with love for our Lord and people in this poem.Love, hugs and blessings
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